I need to improve my paper once again. I intend on going to the First Year Writing Center and hopefully they can guide me in the right direction. I need to gather book resources from joyner library and cite those. I also need to check and make sure I only have 25% quotes, and 75% paraphrase throughout my paper. I would also like to include more statistics about previous wars so I can support my argument. I will keep working on a great attention grabber and make sure my thesis shines!