Monthly Archives: November 2012

Changes to My Peer Response Essay

As a peer response writer, I praise, encourage, and relate to my peers in their writing. Although these are all good response styles I tend to lack constructive criticism and more detail of what needs to be fixed or changed … Continue reading

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Response to Rachel’s Peer Response Essay

Rachel, it is always a good idea to start off with questions of who the audience is, the content, the purpose, and the main idea of the piece of writing you are dealing with. Starting with these topics will allow … Continue reading

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Peer Response essay

Writing has always been a way to express my feelings. Whenever Im feeling down or fustrated I write because I can never speak the words Im feeling. English 1100 has opened my eyes to many new writing sources.Using google documents, … Continue reading

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Color Coding

Clarity/ Specificity Goodwill/ Encouragement Asking questions Using I-statements Directive Statements (You should…, Change this.  Do that.) Relating to the writer Discussing my own writing Level 1 Concerns (Audience, Purpose, Content, Ideas) Level 2 Concerns (Thesis, Organization/ Structure) Level 3 Concerns … Continue reading

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Response to Aaron’s TIB project

Aaron what a great idea! I bet the residents of the nursing home just adored you! I have had my fair share of nursing home visits, but it was a little different for me. My mom happened to work at … Continue reading

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Reponse to Cody’s TIB essay

Cody I admire you for speaking your beliefs on such a touchy topic to our higher officials. You seem to know quite a bit about the legalization and I didnt even know it was amendment 420! I know people always … Continue reading

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Response to Lily TIB visual

Lily your project made me tear up! I am an animal lover just like you and I also worked for a Humane Society for my senior project and I loved it. Even though it is a sad subject, you have … Continue reading

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