Response to Caroline’s TIB Essay

Caroline, I can tell that your grandfather was a big inspiration to you and I imagine for your family as well. He definitely sounds like a trooper with a strong heart and body. The overall structure of your essay is very organized and flows smoothly. Asking a question to start off your essay is a great way to grab the readers attention. I can only imagine the pain your family went through during that time. Fighting the odds only makes you stronger and gives others hope!

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