Response to Caroline’s Peer Essay

Caroline, what a great essay. Your opening paragraph is precise and lets the reader know exactly what you are about to discuss. I also like that you used me as an example. :)  Your overall essay was well written and organized. The sentences flowed smoothly and you provided many great examples of the type of responder you are. You seem to have improved on the structure of your essays throughout the semester.  Great job girl!

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